And I ve read some beauties The story had
"NO COHESION THE TIMELINE JUMPED AROUND WITHOUT ANYTHING TO "cohesion The timeline jumped around without anything to the smexy scenes The grammar was poor there were a ot of words used incorrectly the sex scenes were muddled with inconsistencies and the POV kept jumping around without warning The main characters definitely had some chemistry and if the story had been proofread by someone with a small grasp of grammar it
might have been good Sera answers an ad for a surrogate mother A mother s son was dead and wanted have been good Sera answers an ad for a surrogate mother A mother s son was dead and wanted grandchild Only the son wasn t dead after all Very short read It had ots "of potential and I did ike it but I felt it needed a "potential and I did ike it but I felt it needed a development When I read the summary I was instantly captivatedBut then when I got the book and started reading it I got one disappointment after anotherThis book has a great blot that was poorly written Unfortunately for me because I was sure I d fall in ove with this book and re read it over and over again That Black Heart, Red Ruby ll teach me not to judge a book by it s summary and to read other people reviews before buying any book. Slip by her She discovered aot of things she hadn’t counted on morning sickness a sky rocketing ibido and the sudden arrival of the man she’d never expected to meet her baby’s fath. Ok my other issues with the book
The 2 main characters did not have one meaningful conversation They hardley knew each other at all 2 main characters did not have one meaningful conversation They hardley knew each other at all they jumped in the sack and then declared ove for each other Plus there was no background info to explain why the Sera was the way she was What situation turned her into this untrusting scared person My ongoing dislike of the Sera continues when after Nigel saves her New Plant Parent: Learn the Ways of Plant Parenthood life and then gives her the best sex of herife she dosent speak to him for 3 days She decides that its important to have her defenses independece and cold heartedness than to Dreaming Me: An African-American Woman's Buddhist Journey let someone in and trust them andove them I understand her fear its only normal but its not just her in the situation she needs to think of her kids as well Any blind person could see that Nigel was going to be a good father and for her to just categorize him as every other man that et her down was unfair to her kids unfair to him and just an excuse to remain the way she was her desire to not want to change seemed selfish and really she just comes off as a bitch Not only was.
SERA WAS MOVED BY THE PLEAwas moved by the plea the woman who’d posted the ad for
a surrogate to carry her dead son’s child Beyond that it sparked a need dormant withinsurrogate to carry her dead son’s child Beyond that it sparked a need dormant within She still had her doubts as to. ,
She a bitch but she was a hypocrite She was the one that was shutting the door in his face right after they have sex yet she was Placing Nigel in the category with all the other menYou can t have it both ways either he is
Fluke Or You Are Justor you are just to find anything wrong with him to break with him because you are a coward and care about your pride Plus there was no real resolution I didn t feel ike they really resolved their issues just skipped over them and moved on to happily ever after I am getting really tired of this type of female
Character That Is So Prevelentthat is so prevelent many romance novels It makes it hard to enjoy the book bc your so consumed with anger over this stupid chic The sex scenes were really great in this book but I could not enjoy them bc the rest of the story was so far fetched and un reachable or relatable This will be the ast first and only book from this author that I read DNF This is one of those books that the story could have been great butThis has to be one of the most poorly written and poorly edited books I ve ever read. Whether she was actually cut out to be anyone’s mother and whether or not she could juggle motherhood with her demanding business but realized it was an opportunity she didn’t want to.